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in
  a forward motion
     over  the    deep fall
ing floor of  the     world
    where  the   tapestry
of streetshines races  in
    gentlechaotic
    consonance tranced -

a   figure    of  lights
    alone with   darkness
closing  in  around   and
infecting      the state
of  man's expanse   and
the photons of         sun
     fire consuming    the
horizon,   stretching
across the bend of   the
world       (visible     
only from  this   height)
irre gular   in     form
to    eat   the  darkness
alive,             dispelling
the  blank empty  -

we  begin our slow
but shaky   descent
to   the     earthborn
starfield below,   with
      infinite    blackness
be  neath eachtwinkling
iri   descent star
of   human creation;

we sink  in   to  the
             collective man
©2004-2009 ~PrivateerLunatic
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:iconsaellys:
The standard "very e.e. cummings" comment fare applies here. But I like it anyway. ;^)

--
Every artist is a cannibal;
Every poet is a thief.
All kill their inspiration
Then sing about the grief.
:iconladydicapolis:
excellent structure, and lyrically brilliant. awsome!
:iconprojectinvasion:
excellent. reminds me of ee cummings.

--
In God we trust. All others we virus scan.

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